April 15, 2016 // 8:00 AM hubspot.com
How to Write a Marketing Email: 10 Tips for Writing Compelling Email Copy
Written by Lindsay Kolowich | @lkolo25
Email
marketing has come a long way in just the past few years. But with all
the fancy new functionality brands are utilizing, you know what’s kind
of funny? A well-written, plain-text email can perform just as well (if
not better) than a highly designed email with tons of bells and
whistles.
In
fact, no matter how fancy your marketing emails look, if they’re devoid
of well-written content, your subscribers will stop opening -- and
start deleting -- your messages.
So,
how do you write a great marketing email? It all comes down to a few
copywriting best practices that you should apply to both the subject
line of your message and the message body itself.
Next time you draft a message for a lead nurturing campaign or just a one-time email send, ask yourself whether your copy meets all of these guidelines first.
10 Email Copywriting Tips for Writing Better Marketing Emails
We'll start with copywriting tips for better subject lines, followed by copywriting tips for the bodies of your emails.
How to Write a Subject Line
Part
of writing effective email copy is nailing the subject line. The
subject line is like the gatekeeper of your email: No one gets to read
your stellar email copy if they aren't interested enough to open your
email in the first place.
That
interest is garnered almost wholly on the subject line of the email
(with the sender name playing a role, as well). We've written a few blog
posts about crafting email subject lines, including one on the anatomy of a great subject line and one showing 18 examples of awesome subject lines from brands. Here's a distillation of what you need to know to write some excellent copy.
1) Use actionable language.
With
email subject lines, using actionable language doesn't necessarily mean
using verbs, although it certainly helps. OpenTable, for example, sent
me an email that said "Take Mom to Brunch" in the subject line. This is
one way to use actionable language effectively in email subject lines:
by incorporating a verb (like "take," "download," "reserve," "ask,"
"buy," etc.), the reader knows exactly what they can do in the email.
But
there are ways to use actionable language without relying on verbs,
which gives you more room to play around with wording. What it comes
down to is using language that makes it clear to the recipient what they
can do with the information in the email, should they choose to open it. In other words, keep the value for the user top-of-mind.
For
example, I once got an email from TicketMaster with the subject line
"Don't Miss Bruce Springsteen and the E Street Band." They didn't order
me to purchase tickets by saying "Purchase Tickets Tomorrow for Bruce
Springsteen and the E Street Band," though such a subject line may have
performed just as well. The original subject line worked well because it
was clear what I could do with the information in that email --
ensure I'm prepared for the 10:00 AM sale time so I could snag my
tickets. (Which I did, thanks to that email!)
2) Personalize when possible.
Emails
that are highly segmented tend to have higher performance levels --
such as open rate and clickthrough rate -- than emails that aren't
personalized. According to a study by Direct Marketing Association, segmented
and targeted emails generated 58% of all revenue for the marketers
surveyed, and 36% of revenues were driven by emails sent to specific
target selections.
This
isn't exactly surprising. After all, the more segmented your email
list, the better able you are to personalize the subject line and
provide relevant content to that email recipient.
So
ask yourself: Is there a way to make your email subject line more
personal? And I'm not talking about the dynamic field where you insert
someone's [FIRSTNAME] -- email recipients stopped being impressed by
that fancy functionality some time ago.
Consider this scenario instead: You're a realtor with a huge database of clients ...
- Some of them are looking to rent, while others prefer to buy.
- Their ideal location ranges across several cities and zip codes.
- They all have different price points with which they're comfortable.
- Some are looking for a studio, while others want a mansion.
- You even know that a group of them will only accept homes that have been renovated in the past 5 years.
You certainly wouldn't do a blanket email send across all of these different segments of your list, would you?
And
your email subject line wouldn't be the same, either. You might have
one subject line that says, "Renovated 1BR Apartment for Rent in
Cambridge: Schedule a Viewing," and another that says, "RSVP: Open House
Sunday for Colonial House in Sudbury." Each subject line speaks to the
radically different needs of two radically different list segments.
3) Prioritize clarity, and only then think about "catchiness."
Write a subject line that is clear first, and catchy second. In marketing copy, clarity should always, always, always be your first priority. If, after you've drafted a clear subject line, you can also make it catchy, funny, cute, whimsical, whatever, then go for it. But never sacrifice clarity for the entertainment value.
UrbanDaddy is an example of a company that excels at writing subject lines that are always clear, and sometimes also catchy, funny, or entertaining. Take a look at the subject lines of some of the emails I've received from them:
UD | A Hotel in the Middle of the Ocean
UD | Nunchucks. Made from Beer Cans. Finally.
UD | Getting Everyone Together: Now Less Obnoxious
UD | A Grill the Size of a Foosball Table
UD | It's Ice Cream. It's Beer. It's Beer Ice Cream.
UD | Here's a Private Bahamian Island. Do Your Thing.
Some of these subject lines either make the recipients chuckle or are bizarre enough to pique your interest. But it is always extremely clear what you will get when you open the email.
... Which brings us to our next point.
4) Align your subject line copy and email copy.
You might already know how crucial it is for your call-to-action copy and your landing page offer to align. Well, it's no different when crafting your email subject line and email message.
What
your email subject line promises, the email message should deliver.
Why? It's not just because it's responsible -- it's also because when
readers don't get what they're actually promised in the subject line,
click-through rates plummet. (And, in the long term, so will your email
open rates.)
Back in 2011, we performed a test of our own. We sent the same email with two different subject lines to two different groups of people:
- "54 New Data Slides for Your Marketing Decks": 26% click-through rate
- "Get Key Marketing Trends From the Marketing Data Box": 10.4% click-through rate
The
first subject line, which was straightforward and much more accurate
had a better click-through rate by 15.4% over the second subject line,
which was more vague and less accurate.
The key takeaway here? A high email open rate means nothing without any clickthroughs.
How to Write an Email
Now
that you've crafted a stellar email subject line, you have your
audience's full attention on the body of your email message. So, how do
you craft copy that will get them clicking? Here are the important
components you need to know!
5) Establish relevancy.
Just
like the email subject line should strive to establish relevancy
through personalization, so should the copy in the message of the email.
Again,
it takes more than just a dynamic name tag for your email copy to
convince readers that what's inside is relevant to them. So use the very
beginning of the email to explain how you know each other.
Below
is an example of an email sent by Warby Parker to a colleague of mine.
(By the way, the subject line was very clever: "Uh-oh, your prescription
is expiring.")
Take a look at that first paragraph, called out in red. Right off the bat, the marketers at Warby Parker tell the reader why they're
being emailed (their prescription is expiring soon) and that this email
is meant to help them find a new pair of glasses before that expiration
date.
Imagine
if this email didn't have that first paragraph, and started instead
with what is currently the second paragraph: "Getting a new prescription
can be a hassle. Luckily, it's easy to make an appointment with an
optometrist at our Newbury Street Store or through our friends at
ZocDoc."
...
Why are you emailing me about a prescription? Why would I want your
advice? How do you know I live near Newbury Street? By reminding the
recipient that they gave Warby Parker their prescription information in
the past, there's a greater likelihood that that person will click
through and redeem the offer in this email.
6) Write in the second person.
Writing
in the second person means using the pronouns “you,” “your,” and
“yours." For example, "Before you leave in the morning, remember to
bring your jacket." It means you orient the copy towards the reader, not
yourself.
Take a look at the copy in this email from Zappos, for example:
Now,
count how many times this email says "You" instead of "we" or "I." Okay
okay, we won't make you count: The words "you" and "your" appear 12
times, while "we," "our," and "we're" appear only 5 times.
That's
a nice balance of second person language that keeps the focus on the
customer, not the brand. This is a subtle tactic that helps you stay
value-oriented, but this next step I'm about to cover is crucial to
hitting the point home.
7) Talk about benefits, not features.
You know the value of your email. But does your recipient? No, not yet. And it's your job to explain it.
The
problem is, many emails only explain the feature they are offering, not
the benefit. Take a look at the copy in two separate ecommerce emails
I've received. Which one is touting the feature, and which is touting
the benefit?
If
you guessed email B, you're right. Email A throws a 30% off discount
directly in your face, but doesn't explain the value behind it. What
does 30% off a GoDaddy product do for my goals? Will it let me adjust a
small business' expenditures on infrastructure costs, freeing up money
for a new hire? That benefit is far more tangible than 30% off an
undisclosed cost.
Compare
that with Email B from Banana Republic. The goal of this email is to
sell shorts, but the copy isn't just shoving shorts down the recipient's
throat. I mean, they're shorts ... big deal, right? They've identified
what makes these shorts worthwhile: their versatility. They allow a man
to lounge around the house and then go out in the city while putting
minimal effort into changing his outfit. How convenient! How easy! Howversatile!
The
copy translates the benefit of buying those shorts, but the copy (or
lack thereof) in GoDaddy's email doesn't explain the benefit of
redeeming a generic 30% off offer.
8) Be brief.
One
of the worst mistakes email copywriters make is trying to shove the
entire story into the email message. Think about when you open a
marketing email in your inbox. Do you read every single word in there?
Probably not. It's more likely that you scan for important points so you
can glean the overall message, and decide whether you want to take any
action.
So
if you're sending email with hundreds of words of copy, you're making
it much more difficult for recipients to decide whether they want to
click through -- simply because they can't quickly sift through all of
the information in your email.
Instead,
find a way to summarize what the reader will get in a compelling way,
and let them click through to a page on your website for more
information.
Take
a look at how the folks over at Postmates drafted a brief email
encouraging readers to click through for a limited-time offer:
Postmates
doesn't wait to get to the point. After a brief, friendly hello, they
get right down to the purpose of the email: telling customers about
their new "free lattes on-demand" promotion. After introducing the
concept, they offer a few of the essential details, then get right to
the call-to-action.
Keeping your message on-point is the key to writing brief email copy.
What's the point you're trying to make with your email? If you know the
action your email is supposed to drive -- recipient orders free lattes
on-demand, recipient remembers to buy their Bruce Springsteen tickets,
recipient gets motivated to work out -- then you'll have a much easier
time drafting succinct email copy that remains focused on that one end
goal.
If
writing succinct email copy isn't enough of a motivator for you to
narrow down your goals, remember that having just one primary
call-to-action in your email marketing results in better clickthrough
rates than emails with competing calls-to-action.
9) Be lovable.
Just
because emails are meant to inform doesn't mean they can't also
delight. In some cases, email can be a great avenue for letting your
brand's personality shine, helping you build a meaningful relationship
with the folks on your email lists. After all, providing a
lovable experience for people begins and ends with how you communicate
with them.
Check
out the example below from the folks over at Death to Stock Photos. The
point of the email is to apologize for an email they’d sent the
previous day, which promoted a product that sold out way too quickly,
didn’t ship internationally, and generally gave a lot of their customers
a poor experience.
Notice
the part of the email that's called out in red. Using concise,
personable language, they explain what happened, apologize for the
mistake, say what they learned from it and how they'll prevent it from
happening in the future, and give the recipient several options for
following up.
The
format of this portion of the email is optimized for the large number
of recipients who are likely skimming the email. The bold text and
one-sentence paragraphs make it easy to follow. Finally, they aren't
afraid to add some personality using phrases like "Give us a wavvveeee"
to humanize their brand. The result? Recipients are probably much more open to forgiving them for the honest mistake.
10) Use actionable language in your call-to-action.
That's
right: Emails have calls-to-action, too. Well, the good ones do. First
and foremost, your email call-to-action should be extremely easy to
identify. Remember: People scan their emails. If there's one thing you
want your recipient to pick up on, it's your call-to-action.
If you're sending an HTML email, you may decide to include a button, like this AmazonLocal email did below.
There are two qualities that make this call-to-action button effective:
- Great design: First, notice how the large, bright orange button stands out from the blue design; that call-to-action certainly isn't hard to find.
- Great copy: The copy on the button is just as important. Your call-to-action button should include language that is succinct, clear, and action-oriented. This AmazonLocal button tells you in very few words what you can do using verbs -- you can view the deal showcased in the email.
But
it's also crucial to spend some time optimizing your plain-text emails
for clear calls-to-action. No matter how fancy your HTML email are, not
all email clients will render your images, and not all email recipients
will choose to display your images. In fact, we studied whether HTML emails or plain-text emails performed best and found that,while people say they
prefer HTML-based and image-based emails, in reality, simpler emails
perform best -- and plain-text emails perform best of all.
Take a look at how one of our emails makes use of linked anchor text to draw recipients' attention toward the calls-to-action:
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